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May 11, 2008 19:11:03 GMT -5
Post by Giselle on May 11, 2008 19:11:03 GMT -5
Hahahaha ...... I love it
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May 11, 2008 19:11:37 GMT -5
Post by Fluffy Poodle on May 11, 2008 19:11:37 GMT -5
Thanks! ;D
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May 12, 2008 14:11:07 GMT -5
Post by chris88 on May 12, 2008 14:11:07 GMT -5
"Hippies"
Jim Beam and Jack to go Thoughts high on marijuana and a long forgotten tomorrow Major in chemistry and dope a whole nation Music from another planet Satisfying salvation Hitchike a ride from childhood to pavement Next week! See me die as entertainment With flowers in your hair and crystal in your ass You stand on a bridge to jump but pass Crumbling with pain and the thought of dying alone Cry the night away and regret the day you left home
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May 13, 2008 14:22:08 GMT -5
Post by seacow on May 13, 2008 14:22:08 GMT -5
See me die as entertainment...
YES! best line so far. Great job Chris!
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May 14, 2008 17:42:32 GMT -5
Post by niki1221 on May 14, 2008 17:42:32 GMT -5
I am in awe of all your skills *hugs for everybody*
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May 15, 2008 8:22:02 GMT -5
Post by kate on May 15, 2008 8:22:02 GMT -5
Oh! WOW! You all rock!
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May 17, 2008 14:32:31 GMT -5
Post by chris88 on May 17, 2008 14:32:31 GMT -5
A broken flower with it's roots still in the ground A forrest full of plants and trees but nobody saw me falling down This posionous water keeps getting in I'm drowing in a pool of my own dark sins A flower of beauty and innocence Taken down by power and ignorance
Watch me rot Rot forever Rot away You stupid flower
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May 17, 2008 20:00:32 GMT -5
Post by Giselle on May 17, 2008 20:00:32 GMT -5
OMGosh Chris!!! That is so powerful. You have some talent there young lady
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May 18, 2008 9:05:45 GMT -5
Post by sharie on May 18, 2008 9:05:45 GMT -5
Each time she closes her eyes She hears the rumors, the backstabbing, and those vicious lies With all of these a friendships demise All this provokes the little girl’s cries Why must you all be so mean? You twist those words that were spoken so clean People get jealous and try to ruin the fun Because of their attempts, the end has begun High school has thought this girl a few things About how not to let people pull her with strings Every time she thinks she makes a friend The person twists and yanks and tries to make her bend They want all the attention and that’s what they get Until someone sees their friendship a bit of a threat They poison the mind and ruin it all And soon after that the little girl falls She gives up on everything and does not care Yet you continue to watch her just stand there You pride yourself on breaking her down You laugh and joke about making her frown But it’s not funny anymore don’t you see It’s over and done with yet you still laugh “tee hee hee” “Yay way to go, you got her good, Wahoo!” As you watch her cry you mummer “awe boo hoo” But don’t you get it, she won not you She’s not crying anymore she’s laughing at you, Because that’s the only thing you know how to do All of you people hurt others as a way to get off When your done your on to the next no biggie no loss Each time she closes her eyes She hears the rumors, the backstabbing, and those vicious lies Except now she has grown and has started a new, and hopes someday that you will too.
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May 18, 2008 14:04:40 GMT -5
Post by Fluffy Poodle on May 18, 2008 14:04:40 GMT -5
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May 20, 2008 6:24:00 GMT -5
Post by chris88 on May 20, 2008 6:24:00 GMT -5
song i wrote
All these signs that scream no. Telling me to slow down Because I have spent too much time foolin' around Hills are getting steeper and rumors they are flying I can sense my childhood dream crahing down and dying
'Cus I'm in love with the thought of being in love But I'm afraid of falling I'm in love love love with the thought of being in love Oh won't you hear me calling
I know I'm breaking hearts the way that I behave But maybe love will come my way some god forsaken day So the search still goes on now and forever And if you're feeling lucky jsut send me a letter
I'm in love with the thought of being in love But I'm afraid of falling I'm in love love love with the thought of being in love Oh won't you hear me calling
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May 20, 2008 12:22:26 GMT -5
Post by Fluffy Poodle on May 20, 2008 12:22:26 GMT -5
I love it Chris!
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dana
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May 20, 2008 23:12:10 GMT -5
Post by dana on May 20, 2008 23:12:10 GMT -5
A broken flower with it's roots still in the ground A forrest full of plants and trees but nobody saw me falling down This posionous water keeps getting in I'm drowing in a pool of my own dark sins A flower of beauty and innocence Taken down by power and ignorance Watch me rot Rot forever Rot away You stupid flower hey that's a cool poem
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May 21, 2008 17:29:00 GMT -5
Post by seacow on May 21, 2008 17:29:00 GMT -5
We had a thing
A thing that I never thought would end
I was so damn proud to call you my best friend
I would share anything, even life with you
And if I had to, I swear I would die for you
But as time went by you became a shadow to me
And now I am alone, f**k why can't you just see
I am so sick and tired of trying to pretend
I just said it on the phone, "I miss my best friend"
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May 21, 2008 17:53:34 GMT -5
Post by chris88 on May 21, 2008 17:53:34 GMT -5
powerful...
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