esra
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May 7, 2008 17:40:43 GMT -5
Post by esra on May 7, 2008 17:40:43 GMT -5
My parents are retired Turkish Language and Literature teachers so I grew up in a house of books and loads of poetry lines so I think Ive had enough, ewwww hate poetry now, sorry gals but I wont be checking this thread any more.
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May 7, 2008 17:58:42 GMT -5
Post by seacow on May 7, 2008 17:58:42 GMT -5
Angel I would be very interested. I don't think I have your email...or myspace! so please share
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May 7, 2008 20:23:30 GMT -5
Post by fallenangel on May 7, 2008 20:23:30 GMT -5
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May 8, 2008 11:33:52 GMT -5
Post by chris88 on May 8, 2008 11:33:52 GMT -5
something i wrote, right here, right now, because i just got a call from my dad Look out your window through the darkness of the rain Sense my burning soul as it digs through your deepest pain Can you feel me now dad? All the tears I've shed Can you hurt at all dad? Do my disapointment linger in your head? When will you empty the bottle I've seen you hold so close? When will you actually love the lifeline you once in your life chose? Where's the hero I loved so much before? Why did that hero run away and shut the door?
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May 8, 2008 13:21:23 GMT -5
Post by fallenangel on May 8, 2008 13:21:23 GMT -5
amazing, Chirs
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May 8, 2008 13:59:52 GMT -5
Post by kate on May 8, 2008 13:59:52 GMT -5
I only haven't responded cos I didn't know what to say... The only thing I could think was I wanted to give you a hug!
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May 8, 2008 19:54:02 GMT -5
Post by Giselle on May 8, 2008 19:54:02 GMT -5
Thanks for sharing Chris
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lizzie
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May 9, 2008 3:19:43 GMT -5
Post by lizzie on May 9, 2008 3:19:43 GMT -5
Big hug Chris
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May 9, 2008 6:00:16 GMT -5
Post by chris88 on May 9, 2008 6:00:16 GMT -5
Thank you
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May 9, 2008 7:03:17 GMT -5
Post by chris88 on May 9, 2008 7:03:17 GMT -5
a really old one i wrote about an ex...
Is this a sign that you and I are through? You could stop me from feeling so blue But truth is I get depressed when I’m with you
Wanting to run away But somthing about you makes me stay Could I give you another day?
Some nights get so cold Thought I could use someone to hold But what can I do when my heart has gone cold?
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May 9, 2008 7:30:52 GMT -5
Post by kate on May 9, 2008 7:30:52 GMT -5
wow
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May 9, 2008 7:39:58 GMT -5
Post by Giselle on May 9, 2008 7:39:58 GMT -5
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May 9, 2008 9:29:11 GMT -5
Post by seacow on May 9, 2008 9:29:11 GMT -5
Chris got the skillz! I knew it ;D
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Zaniac
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May 9, 2008 10:49:52 GMT -5
Post by Zaniac on May 9, 2008 10:49:52 GMT -5
She danced in the fog, as graceful as a gentle breeze Turning and prancing softly 'round the weeping trees Nature conjures a tune that she feels within her soul Sweeping away all cares, her cleansed heart stole. Smiles towards the sky as she opens her arms like wings Spinning slowly, taking full breaths, in love with her dreams.
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May 9, 2008 11:51:34 GMT -5
Post by iwtrevor on May 9, 2008 11:51:34 GMT -5
Wow! All great stuff everybody! Zaniac, I read yours a couple times.... Beautiful!
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