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Poetry
May 6, 2008 13:00:45 GMT -5
Post by seacow on May 6, 2008 13:00:45 GMT -5
So this last month I have become more and more excited about poetry. Especially the post modern stuff is just amazing to me. I gave it a try myself and made a poem myself. I would love for you guys to give a comment on it, and maybe post some poems you made (I know Chrissy did some) or maybe just post your favorite poem. The poem is called "Another time" Enjoy If I go before you wake I want you to know, it was a big mistake What I am looking for, I do not know But to find what I seek, I know I have to go I might come back, in a few hundred years And if I do, I will only have happy tears So If i go before you wake I want you to know, it was a good mistake.
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Poetry
May 6, 2008 13:22:44 GMT -5
Post by chris88 on May 6, 2008 13:22:44 GMT -5
cool!!! i liked that a lot!
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Poetry
May 6, 2008 16:20:31 GMT -5
Post by fallenangel on May 6, 2008 16:20:31 GMT -5
OMG, I love it, very good I love poetry, I have many books with stuff I've written or thoughts that pop in my head, little skittish though sharing them, no one has ever seen them but me. Who knows, maybe I'll dig some out....
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Poetry
May 6, 2008 17:51:26 GMT -5
Post by seacow on May 6, 2008 17:51:26 GMT -5
Wow, thank you! Angel, I would love to see some of the stuff you have written down, even if its not totally complete. How about you Chris? I know you have some!
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Poetry
May 6, 2008 18:59:24 GMT -5
Post by Giselle on May 6, 2008 18:59:24 GMT -5
That was great
My daughter and I wrote a song, well words. She came over to me and said "Mum I want to write a song" so she said somethings and then we worked on it, I should dig it out.
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Poetry
May 6, 2008 20:52:50 GMT -5
Post by fallenangel on May 6, 2008 20:52:50 GMT -5
O.K. so here goes...*crosses fingers*
I see you in the morning light It was I who watched over you through the night I see the face I love so much I hold your hand and feel your touch I'm never gone, I'd never leave By your side I'll always be So never worry or dismay For I am with you everyday When the road is long and you are alone I will be the one to carry you home I'll say it once and I'll say it twice You are my love, my sacrifice
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May 6, 2008 22:00:25 GMT -5
Post by Giselle on May 6, 2008 22:00:25 GMT -5
Beautiful, thanks for sharing it.
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May 6, 2008 23:51:05 GMT -5
Post by Fluffy Poodle on May 6, 2008 23:51:05 GMT -5
Cool. Thanks for sharing. I write but I'm too much of a wimp to let anyone read them most of the time.
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Poetry
May 7, 2008 2:28:14 GMT -5
Post by kate on May 7, 2008 2:28:14 GMT -5
Holy moly Seacow and Fallen Angel!!! They're both great! Hats off to you both!
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Poetry
May 7, 2008 4:19:16 GMT -5
Post by seacow on May 7, 2008 4:19:16 GMT -5
giselle i used to make my mom write small stories down i told. Its so much fun to read them today, so make sure you keep your songs Angel I love your poem. I always had a thing for love poems, and I think yours is right on! Oh and fluffypoodle dont be scared I would love to see your stuff!
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Poetry
May 7, 2008 9:17:56 GMT -5
Post by fallenangel on May 7, 2008 9:17:56 GMT -5
TY Here's one from my darker days, I left my footprints in the sand So someone can find where I am I walk the streets of life alone Hoping to find a place I can call home No one seems to notice me Will I ever find where I am meant to be
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May 7, 2008 10:29:02 GMT -5
Post by seacow on May 7, 2008 10:29:02 GMT -5
Wow - How many of these do you have Angel?
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May 7, 2008 12:46:51 GMT -5
Post by chris88 on May 7, 2008 12:46:51 GMT -5
that's beautiful fallenangel!!!
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May 7, 2008 12:54:12 GMT -5
Post by chris88 on May 7, 2008 12:54:12 GMT -5
Wow, thank you! Angel, I would love to see some of the stuff you have written down, even if its not totally complete. How about you Chris? I know you have some! in time my friend, in time...
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Poetry
May 7, 2008 14:02:19 GMT -5
Post by fallenangel on May 7, 2008 14:02:19 GMT -5
Wow - How many of these do you have Angel? I have a lots, if you are really interested in reading them, send me an email/or myspace message, I don't want to bore everyone with them. Thanks Chris! Would also love to read some of yours
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