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May 9, 2008 12:43:09 GMT -5
Post by chris88 on May 9, 2008 12:43:09 GMT -5
;DWow Zaniac!
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May 9, 2008 12:47:55 GMT -5
Post by kate on May 9, 2008 12:47:55 GMT -5
aaaawwwwweeeesome Zaniac! Karma to you!
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May 9, 2008 13:05:37 GMT -5
Post by Fluffy Poodle on May 9, 2008 13:05:37 GMT -5
Wow. You have a deep soul Chris. Kudos to both of you.
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May 9, 2008 19:20:31 GMT -5
Post by Giselle on May 9, 2008 19:20:31 GMT -5
That is a stunning poem, thanks for sharing it
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May 9, 2008 20:20:09 GMT -5
Post by Zaniac on May 9, 2008 20:20:09 GMT -5
Thanks all! I need to get back into writing more. I've been consumed with writing actionscript, css, html, etc. over the last couple years I've almost forgotten the power of real words. lol
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May 10, 2008 17:47:10 GMT -5
Post by seacow on May 10, 2008 17:47:10 GMT -5
Not the best, but I am still learning ! : )
Here we go again, screaming at each other
Using words that I shouldn't, because I really love her
But who was he, and what was he doing to you?
One more lie, and I swear I will split his head in two
I smile and laugh at you, but inside of me it burns
If she looked me in the eyes she would know how much it hurts
I could sit at a bar filled with women, just waiting for her call
If she cant see that....
Well I guess she ain't worth it after all.
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May 10, 2008 19:37:28 GMT -5
Post by Giselle on May 10, 2008 19:37:28 GMT -5
Well done Simon Some Karma coming your way
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May 10, 2008 20:39:25 GMT -5
Post by Zaniac on May 10, 2008 20:39:25 GMT -5
Wickedness lies upon the Heart of steel Forever breaking as it pretends to heal It stitches up it's woe with resentment and fear Showing it's intentions are never quite clear The Mind forcing it to not work it's right Leaks of love disburse for the fight "Why do you hold me back, Mind?" questions the Heart "Let not the love I find depart." The Mind screams a reminder of a stab once afflicted And all the reasons why it must remain constricted The Heart cries, regardless, for something true Hoping the day will come when the Mind lets it through
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May 10, 2008 22:24:33 GMT -5
Post by Fluffy Poodle on May 10, 2008 22:24:33 GMT -5
This was about life in nursing school. Kinda mellow dramatic now that I look at it again. Disconnected All alone In a world of doubt Wondering how This will all turn out Overwhelmed I've been consumed Drowning in A sea of gloom The earth still turns The birds still sing And people still Do random things The sun will set The moon still rises And life still holds Many surprises But this is not What I expected I stand alone Disconnected Sifting through The twilight dreams Of how things are And how they seem I see the world Through narrowed lens Beyond my reach It all extends A distant life I cannot touch The familiar that I miss so much Further back It's drawn away Confused, I feel I'm on display Trying to keep My heart protected Alone I stand Disconnected
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May 10, 2008 22:57:00 GMT -5
Post by Zaniac on May 10, 2008 22:57:00 GMT -5
We've all had moments like that. Writing it down helps in fixing or healing what you're dealing with.
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May 11, 2008 5:08:02 GMT -5
Post by seacow on May 11, 2008 5:08:02 GMT -5
Well done Simon Some Karma coming your way Thank you ;D We have some amazing poets in here, omg?!
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May 11, 2008 6:00:05 GMT -5
Post by Giselle on May 11, 2008 6:00:05 GMT -5
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May 11, 2008 9:38:35 GMT -5
Post by chris88 on May 11, 2008 9:38:35 GMT -5
magnificent all of it... this is a song that a guy at school wrote. it is absolutely beautiful! his voice is so hurtful in the song and the lyrics gives me chills... i can't tell why i am always thinking of you it makes me blue it's funny how things went wrong between me and you teach me how to handle pain and tell me if i seem insane right now all i feel is sorrow inside my soul all i feel is sorrow inside my soul and a bottle of wine and a bottle of wine i can't tell why everything reminds me of you you blow my mind so let me take this break with a bottle of wine
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May 11, 2008 14:30:56 GMT -5
Post by Fluffy Poodle on May 11, 2008 14:30:56 GMT -5
deep
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May 11, 2008 19:08:58 GMT -5
Post by Fluffy Poodle on May 11, 2008 19:08:58 GMT -5
Springtime
My head is aching My eyes are itchy My nose is stuffy It's making me b it chy
Pollen sucks I'm sick of sneezing Scratching, sniffling, Coughing and wheezing
Pretty flowers Aren't so pleasin' I hate this freaking Allergy season
All this nature Drives me crazy Makes me tired Groggy, hazey
Itchy throat, Nose and ears Eyes are swollen Watery tears
Can't wait for summer Fall is fine But I really REALLY hate Springtime!!!!!
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